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Post by Absinthe on Oct 27, 2005 18:43:45 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Well, this is yet another piece inspired by [ www.oneword.com ]. The word of the day was possessed. Like a girl possessed, I sit down and I write. I write until my hand is sore, my fingers cramping into a closed position, my wrist permanently fixed at an angle. Ink splotches decorate my pale, freckled skin and yet I still write, seemingly unable to stem the flow of thoughts and emotions. Words laced with bitter honey flow from the tip of my pen to decorate the page with crooked, bleeding letters. I can't stop it. The words just keep coming and I am powerless against their hold on me. Like a girl possessed, I just keep writing, and writing, and writing...[/glow]
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Post by Only Me on Oct 29, 2005 13:17:33 GMT -6
great job. I love one word... This is awesome for a one minute piece
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Post by Sharon on Oct 30, 2005 21:37:37 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]oh my gosh.. i love this piece! it's almost hard to believe that you wrote that in one minute! wow... i really really like it, i'd seriously consider it one of my favorites... awesome job![/glow]
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Post by Laura on Nov 16, 2005 15:57:22 GMT -6
"Ink splotches decorate my pale, freckled skin
and yet I still write, seemingly unable to stem the flow "
--"stem" is just a wonderful word here.
"Words laced with bitter honey "
--yeah ... brilliant
"with crooked, bleeding letters"
--just the idea of this makes me smile widely.
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 26, 2005 1:00:58 GMT -6
its funny how the title can have so many meanings, i would not have thought of it in that way but now after reading it i see how different every mind is, great work
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