memory goes back along way

[suicidetank]

How youth toyed with me

Through out a childhood's eye
I never seen and never felt what other’s feel
Feign joy and unwanted strife like
This I continue life
When I was younger I kept anger
And within my heart i locked away rage
Idle banter screams and laughter
Thoughtless fits would make time go faster
Inspiration drives my spirit
Still it led me to this fact to those
Who left my mind distraught I
Only thank them for what they wrought
And now I see through out these eyes
Looking out from within seeing you from herein
Walking through eternal night
my heart continues to fall to blight
left with an internal fight they’ve gone
forever my blissful lights
I would love to out run pain once

[allmeheart]

very good work, you are an amazing writer, so far ive loved all ur work, keep writing

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]It makes me think of myself remembering my childhood.[/glow]

[Samccaleb]

This was very well written. I like it alot, the thought put into. I think you're a very good writer. I hope you keep it up. Good job.

[Only Me]

very well written... the only thing that I found that sort of detracts from the quality is "I never seen" ... it should be saw here or ad "have" you are using the wrong tense...