::Goodbye:: [collaboration piece]

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]This is the first SD Collaboration piece hehe Maybe next time we can have more people participating. [/glow]

"Goodbye"
Written By: Pseudo Juliet, dtm, Sharon, and lockely

With a smile, and a tear
I say goodbye.
As I pass through this vaunted hall
For one last time.

There was a time when this place
felt like a prison cell
But now, it feels different,
like an old friend

Memories of laughter
permeate my senses
These flashbacks continue
Till I return to my shell

Hiding away all those moments,
tucking them deep within myself
but even i must admit sometimes
that it was I that was at fault

I tried to pretend it was you
and that I wasn't wrong,
but we both know the truth
and how it eats away at us.

I don't know how long,
I can keep up this facade
Time is almost up,
I'm running out of things to say

I have reached my limit
lost ability to speak,
So I leave with this piece of mind
you can try to manipulate everything

But you cannot mess with time
and you cannot mess with fate,
These are lessons I learned
Perhaps a little too late.

[Absinthe]

it turned out pretty good. Great job co-authors!

[allmeheart]

*reads it again* thats really good, i would have liked to see which parts where whose though *reads it once more* yep, very good poem

[Absinthe]

We really need to people to join for the second callaboration! right now, its just me and Sharon. C'mon people, contribute! lol

[QueenPaige4]

hm...I could contribute. It sounds like fun. But anyways that was really good. Good job everyone that took a part in this brilliant piece

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]I think that this piece really turned out great and everytime I read it, it makes me want to do another collaboration. In fact.... there IS another Collaboration going on... please everybody check it out and participate. you can add one or two lines. C'mon! It's fun!!! ;D [/glow]

[psiloveyou]

That turned out very well. It's interesting how you were all able to collaborate.

[Samccaleb]

I really like this poem, all of you did a truly wonderful job. If you ever want to do another collaboration, let me know. I'm game. Great job everyone.

[Only Me]

great job ya'll! we are all so talented