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Post by Xanthic Flower on May 14, 2005 14:35:22 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]I'm not much of a poet, but Adam (see my sketch) helped me with this one and it turned out alright.
Oblivious Belief is scarce Lost inside myself Inside a burning Visions of hope Illusions of life Outside my understanding Under a new religion Something leaving me so.. empty[/glow]
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Post by Sharon on May 14, 2005 16:18:21 GMT -6
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Post by allmeheart on May 23, 2005 21:26:38 GMT -6
very nice haven't seen acrostic poetry on here until now, i love it good work
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Post by Xanthic Flower on May 24, 2005 16:36:54 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]Thanks guys.[/glow]
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 25, 2005 10:55:58 GMT -6
very nice
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Post by Samccaleb on Oct 7, 2005 21:15:00 GMT -6
I like it. Its short but very well written. Good job.
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Post by Only Me on Oct 9, 2005 1:17:21 GMT -6
"Lost inside myself" my favorite line... nice work!
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