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Post by benjiluver22 on Aug 1, 2005 22:20:30 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]When I'd cry you'd take the pain away. When I'd laugh you'd share the joy. When I'd read you'd put my arm around you. When you left I could barely cry It's just not the same. I lost all the joy in my life. No one can take your place. I love you and miss you!![/glow]
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Post by Sharon on Aug 4, 2005 9:54:54 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]very straight foward, thank you for sharing this with us. i remember my Sophomore year, my teacher would deduct points for every contraction that we would use. maybe, you could avoid using "you'd" so much.[/glow]
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Post by Absinthe on Aug 4, 2005 11:13:40 GMT -6
its not bad. It has potential, but I've got this policy.......honesty always. And well, I dont really like it. Not to say, it isn't well written, it just didn't really appeal to me.
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