Love is make believe?

[QueenPaige4]

Love at first sight
Is it real?
I think so
Everyone says love is make believe
So I must be an invisible force field
of love, hope,faith,and openness
I'm ready for anything but heartache
I'm a walking tomb
that no one cares about
If they can't see it, they don't believe it
And I want to be like
Cinderella and Snow White
I want their fairytale wedding and love
And sometimes I wish
I weren't so invisible
I wish everyone cared
but they all laugh in my face
And tell me that it's not the same
They hate me
So I've heard
And I want to be like
Belle and Ariel
Because they fell in love
And everyone loved them
No one will ever love m
as much as my mother
So can I be like
Lena and Bianca
Fall in love with a
great gorgeous man
who will love me forever
And never leave for
they don't want to lose me
And I"m going to die lonely
With tears frozen to my face
My heart made of ice
My eyes gouged out
My arms rapped around my body
Hugging myself

[thecrazybeautiful]

"And I want to be like
Belle and Ariel
Because they fell in love"

For some reason that part just makes me smile.

"My eyes gouged out
My arms rapped around my body
Hugging myself"

Is it just me, or does that seem like a rather dark image? Not that it's a bad thing, I kinda like it.

For the most part I liked the idea you had going here. We all wish for our perfect love story... It's not as good as others I've read from you, but it's nice.

[QueenPaige4]

thank you...Um..i made it that way on purpose...If you didn't know already Lena is a character from THE SISTERHOOD OF TRAVELING PANTS...and Bianca is from William Shakespears Taming of the Shrew

[Laura]

It has that interesting twist because you added in some references. This:

"I'm a walking tomb "

--is a brilliant line. It could be used in many types of poetry ... I love the image.

[QueenPaige4]

thank you so much

[Only Me]

It is an awesome piece that with a few fine touches can be a classic. I love the fairy tale wanne be concept. Everyone wishes for those things though what we wish for rarely ends up being what we truly got or wanted... ya know what I mean?
perfect references. and you matched them reasonably well. great job!

[QueenPaige4]

thank you so much.

[Sharon]

Oh but love does not have to be a fantasy. It takes love to get love. Of course never mistake love for lust. References to Belle and Ariel resonates to me mainly because I have 3 year old now who loves Beauty and the Beast and The Little Mermaid.

Thank you for sharing!

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"What's love got to do with it?" By Tina Turner, the most honest song ever written in my opinion.