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Post by Laura on Nov 26, 2005 13:27:17 GMT -6
a/n: create your own ideas for what this is about.
Honey Trail
your stare is a boiling point yet chills me to the bone you claw out my insides with your uncut nails and ice me over with your voice
the words, they spill drip over me like a honey trail
when will the bees arrive?
You ask of me, dear, please do not fight this try to recreate it for a fairy tale you plan on living you dance on tribal symbols, to drum cymbols you sharpen your teeth with lightning bolts
you seem to burn my soul so my lungs can't breathe can't seem to inflate with the oxygen this room possesses but you seem to freeze the marrow inside my skeleton will I ever move again?
your words, they drip over me like a honey trail
when will the bees arrive? my dear.
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Post by Only Me on Nov 28, 2005 16:51:40 GMT -6
ok to draw my own conclusion... it sounds like someone who is being seduced... and the person seducing them is using sweet words... and the bees symbolize being "stung" ok well that is only my conclusion... anyways.. great work...
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Post by Laura on Nov 29, 2005 21:15:08 GMT -6
I love to hear other people's perspectives. Your ideas are very interesting, and the way you described it - the references - is incredible
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Post by Only Me on Dec 4, 2005 2:13:05 GMT -6
thanks... I like to read more into words than what is there on paper... It gives me something to do.. .Like I can read something like... "I watched as the tree fell onto his lifeless body" and while most see it is a tree falling onto a person I see it as an emotional drought of the girlfriend of a man in a coma and she is describing how she feels rather than what really happened to him... like what she was seeing happen right before her eyes... just an example... I enjoy reading what other people think of my work becuase more often than not they have a different perception of the words than I do... I really enjoy all of your work, you are truly an inspiring artist...
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Post by Carissa Marie on Jan 1, 2006 19:42:09 GMT -6
Hmmm... this is nice. I'm still contemplating the meaning of this, but I will share what I have so far, kapeesh?
I agree with the seduction idea... Being seduced by someone that you know is only going to burn you. One night stand maybe? Its like they know that the person is only going to leave--and there waiting for it to happen at any moment.
"try to recreate it for a fairy tale you plan on living you dance on tribal symbols, to drum cymbols you sharpen your teeth with lightning bolts"
Wow...
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