grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Oct 11, 2005 0:48:51 GMT -6
with rhythmic runes she doth divine in complete civility the wild waters that round her wind with complex complacency
with torrid tides she doth reside in constant calamity the winter waves begin to bind her common complexities
no brightened blade can quell her rage nor by mystics be it consumed her anger doth engulf the mage before his spell is through
and in the ocean she hath risen coral there doth bloom their mix of color i do envision with the passion in her wounds
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Post by Laura on Oct 30, 2005 16:06:38 GMT -6
The ending is incredible. I like the word choice too.
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Post by Only Me on Oct 30, 2005 16:35:53 GMT -6
I love the way you ended this piece! great work!
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 22, 2005 17:42:47 GMT -6
i loved this, great job, amazing, that really was wonderfully written
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Post by Sharon on Dec 10, 2005 19:16:41 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]i LOVE your use of rhymes. seems like you've selected each word carefully and you didn't just add them simply because they rhymed. nice job.[/glow]
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