Redead Love is Still Love

[Laura]

a/n: yes, this is about zombies. I'm bored of writing about the usual love.

Redead Love is Still Love

destiffed, unlift these eyelids so heavy on my skin
see you eating, make a new meaning of grubbing off your palm
hearing those bones crack, and shake the leftovers off your chin
no plates or napkins here

you're walking hunched over, blood rushing out the sides of your mouth
I can still smell the stench of fresh meat starting to mold on your lips
and who are you now, you're dead without identity
all your fingers met a raging chainsaw

please take me with you to that grave
I want to go with you.

you're walking half backwards, semi-forwards, split in two
you walk as if you are a fork in the road, confused with frustration
you're blind and an easy target to a hidden land mine
crowded in a decaying jacket full of earth worms and filth

but the way you roam the sewers like a bully in a school
soaking what's left of your shoes and socks, you look to rule
you're havoc, chaos, an accident, betrayal to the world
missing teeth and missing cells to function correctly

and there goes one less civilian, their spine riding down your throat
no longer will they scream in terror, they're dying faster
you're not vicious, you are as calm and gentle as they come
and I just want to hold you

please take me with you to that grave
where you lay to rest
when night time retires and the sun rises
burning whatever flesh left

please take me with you to your grave,
I want to lie beside you.

[thecrazybeautiful]

Well, this isn't the usual love

Very different take on a love kind of poem, but of course you were able to make it... I don't really know the word... Interesting, I guess. It's good in that dead-love kind of way.

And the title is awesome.

[stupidxgirl]

This was so dark, I loved it though! It was a very, very interesting take on love. Wonderful job

[QueenPaige4]

i liked it good job

[Only Me]

my favorite lines are
"please take me with you to that grave
I want to go with you"
and
"please take me with you to that grave
where you lay to rest
when night time retires and the sun rises
burning whatever flesh left

please take me with you to your grave,
I want to lie beside you. "
because it seems so erotic and off limits, you are describing a scene that should make a person want to run away and hide but you still want to go to the grave with the zombie. It just seems so erotic. I am trying to think of the word that I want to use to describe it but I can't. maybe later.