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Let Go
Feb 28, 2008 20:30:45 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Feb 28, 2008 20:30:45 GMT -6
The world is one crazy place that is not something new, there is chaos beyond these walls- and there is turmoil inside you.
You can control the madness, you can choose to let go. It's your decision, it's always been- never lose faith in what the future holds.
If you find yourself not hearing your own voice don't lose hope, find your strength - do yourself a favor. Yesterday is gone, tomorrow is getting closer today was an experience, and it isn't over.
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Let Go
Feb 29, 2008 19:16:56 GMT -6
Post by Isabela on Feb 29, 2008 19:16:56 GMT -6
Ohh sharon I like this one, especially this part.
'Yesterday is gone, tomorrow is getting closer today was an experience, and it isn't over.'
I really liked that part. It made me think of the roller coaster thing, how life is a roller coaster. How time can't be stopped so we might as well embrace it and run with it, you know.
The second stanza really caught my attention. It made me think, which is good, because sometimes the only thing we can do is let go.
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Let Go
Feb 29, 2008 20:08:59 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Feb 29, 2008 20:08:59 GMT -6
Thanks Mimi -
That last bit is my favorite in this piece.
I realized that I spend too much time dwelling on how "unproductive" I am ..when that time can be better spent ...well, doing something for a change. You know?
I agree with you there ...sometimes all we can really do is let go.
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Let Go
Mar 1, 2008 19:58:45 GMT -6
Post by Isabela on Mar 1, 2008 19:58:45 GMT -6
Yeah but its hard sometimes, to let go.
I'm glad your seeing things on the other side of the fence, instead of wasting your time being 'unproductive' your doing things to feel as well as be productive. Good job dude, I'm proud of ya!
It really was an awesome piece.
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Let Go
Mar 4, 2008 16:28:12 GMT -6
Post by The Brutal Immortal on Mar 4, 2008 16:28:12 GMT -6
hmmm... i like this piece... its relativly short, and it jumps straight to the point... i think it accuratly describes life, and, i think im over reaching, but maybe a heartbreak? anyways, 9.7 of 10
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Let Go
Mar 6, 2008 21:46:29 GMT -6
Post by sharonslover on Mar 6, 2008 21:46:29 GMT -6
I like it a bunch I think if the world read that every time that they where in a funk the world wouldn't be so negative!!!
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Let Go
Mar 9, 2008 12:55:39 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Mar 9, 2008 12:55:39 GMT -6
Yeah but its hard sometimes, to let go. I'm glad your seeing things on the other side of the fence, instead of wasting your time being 'unproductive' your doing things to feel as well as be productive. Good job dude, I'm proud of ya! It really was an awesome piece. Thank you Mimi! ;D hmmm... i like this piece... its relativly short, and it jumps straight to the point... i think it accuratly describes life, and, i think im over reaching, but maybe a heartbreak? anyways, 9.7 of 10 Thanks man, yeah I see how it can portray a sense of heartbreak. I like it a bunch I think if the world read that every time that they where in a funk the world wouldn't be so negative!!! hm... I'm not sure about that, but thanks!
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