grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Apr 16, 2006 16:09:59 GMT -6
are cramped chameleons unaware of their spectacular spectrums
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Post by Laura on Apr 16, 2006 17:12:59 GMT -6
is the title supposed to be the first line? It sounds more like a quote but it's still effective
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grifter
A Devoted Distraction
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Post by grifter on Apr 16, 2006 19:33:12 GMT -6
yeah it is like a quote, at first i wrote it like this
most people
most people are like cramped...
it was still like a quote, but i decided to let the title, act as the frist line, and drop out like, just trying something small again,
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Post by Only Me on May 9, 2006 14:46:52 GMT -6
its short and once again reminds me of the lines I write out sometimes, its like the only thought that can come out but it ends up working the way it is... nice.
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Post by Sharon on May 23, 2006 19:00:48 GMT -6
short but doesn't fail to uplift, good job
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BlueMoon
A Dedicated Distraction
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Post by BlueMoon on Feb 3, 2007 18:00:12 GMT -6
Short but sweet. Straight to the point writings are sometimes the most effective.
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