I've Found My Home

[Laura]

a/n: my inspirational poetry is almost always inspired by pearl jam. This is no different. Try to find the pearl jam references. They are at the bottom!

I've Found My Home

everything is different now
your voice has suckled into my ear
for real
and now every moment seems lively
as dead as it seems

I wish I could feel your lungs expanding
deflating, I know they would be
after such a roar to claim your title
king of the stage.
a king of all kings

I can just see this image
your fingers tracing my face
in pencil crayon and soft blush colours
humming like a child
but exploding into yourself

it's an evolution, you say
this production is a fascination
I think inside my mind, it's too unreal
the atmosphere is thick
but I'm safe knowing I'm breathing the same air

as you.
as all of you.

and then you slither into your emotions
sliding in and out through immortality
and bring me to your level
let me be even with the flow of your oceans
I want to feel better,

with you.

everything is different now
my ears have been touched by your sound
it trickles down inside and revives a brain cell
I know it was dead before
but it's alive now, still singing long after you're gone.




References

"evolution" comes from do the evolution (yield)
"immortality" comes from immortality (vitalogy)
"even with the flow of your oceans" comes from even flow and oceans (ten)
"alive" comes from alive (ten)

[thecrazybeautiful]

Teehee, I like the references there. I was reading and was like "Ooh, that's from that song..."

"I can just see this image
your fingers tracing my face
in pencil crayon and soft blush colours
humming like a child
but exploding into yourself"

I really like that part. The whole child-like-crayon idea. It really works.

"the atmosphere is thick
but I'm safe knowing I'm breathing the same air

as you.
as all of you."

And that was really nice. So many times I have thought that about a certain singer, or band, about breathing the same air as them. Being on the same Earth...

Well done.

[Only Me]

"I think inside my mind, it's too unreal
the atmosphere is thick
but I'm safe knowing I'm breathing the same air

as you.
as all of you." I am not completely sure why just yet, but those lines really got me. I like them, they stick out. nice work.

[Sharon]

everything is different now
your voice has suckled into my ear
for real
and now every moment seems lively
as dead as it seems

interesting, almost contradicting but yeah interesting.

I wish I could feel your lungs expanding
deflating, I know they would be
after such a roar to claim your title
king of the stage.
a king of all kings

oh yeah that's Pearl Jam inspired alright

I think inside my mind, it's too unreal
the atmosphere is thick
but I'm safe knowing I'm breathing the same air

i LOVE that part.

everything is different now
my ears have been touched by your sound
it trickles down inside and revives a brain cell
I know it was dead before
but it's alive now, still singing long after you're gone.

perfect ending, excellent!