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Sept 14, 2005 12:22:45 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Sept 14, 2005 12:22:45 GMT -6
a/n: to Eddie Vedder and Pearl Jam for the best night of my life. I said this last time but Tuesday's show was better than Monday's. It was amazing. I wish somehow I could thank them better than this. This writing doesn't do the experience, the feeling, or the night any justice.
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how can I take you in my arms? seems I was flying all night but I can't reach you yet and I hope someday somehow my heart will touch yours like your words have touched me
how do you hold your breath? I don't hear my heart beating breaking to the drum's rhythm but I know it's there as these untouchable strings flood my head with this -
just this. this indescribable feeling this indescribable music
how should I remember you? your lips fighting with your hands what produces more energy as you fill the room just with your presence
just by standing there
I feel the need to fall fall to pieces or to just fall in love with somebody
and how do you make the unfeeling - feel again? how do you make the melancholy heart smile again? often wonder if you're some sort of miracle spreading your voice like a virus
now I'm calm
and how do you make me dance again? when I never learned how to
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Oct 1, 2005 16:21:09 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Oct 1, 2005 16:21:09 GMT -6
"I don't hear my heart beating breaking to the drum's rhythm" I like that... i had to stop and re read it because i read it as "I don't hear my heart breaking, beating to the drums rythm" which would have also worked... but yea... just my dislexia showing... lol... anyways... i loved it...
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Oct 2, 2005 21:05:57 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Oct 2, 2005 21:05:57 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]that part stuck out for me... the longing... this was an enjoyable read, thank you[/glow]
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Nov 22, 2005 17:41:16 GMT -6
Post by allmeheart on Nov 22, 2005 17:41:16 GMT -6
nice job, it wasnt bad
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