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Post by Laura on Sept 13, 2005 10:40:14 GMT -6
a/n: to Eddie Vedder & Pearl Jam for the best night of my life. I italized all the words that are also Pearl Jam songs.
You Were Right
I wish I could see your smile just how I hear it in my mind raging through your stage it's all frightening in this wonderous way
and what do you do with such a feeling when you don't want it to disappear how much longer can you hold on to it with fidgety fingers that still play the chords
I can still hear you singing those words and I believe it is "hard to imagine" it almost makes me feel just like I did you make it all worth while
you make me feel alive again.
and I can still see you jumping and I am so proud you run this asylum of ecstatic beings throwing out their arms all this makes me warm inside
I can almost feel your breath and your bundled energy sliding to me and if you could see the electrical wires coming straight out of you and attaching to us
it would be a bloody tangled mess.
and I like this messy hole we've dug ourselves into and I never want to leave just want to hear you once more 'cause you make it all worth while:
you make me feel alive again.
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Post by Sharon on Sept 23, 2005 16:26:16 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]there is something about these lines that i found real interesting, good job, thanks for sharing ;D[/glow]
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Post by Only Me on Oct 1, 2005 16:25:45 GMT -6
you really show your emotions in this one... you used great references... good job!
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Post by allmeheart on Nov 22, 2005 17:38:35 GMT -6
it held my attention and i think it flowed well, good work
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