How time affects us

[burningsun]

[glow=blue,2,300]With time comes great mystery
both of joy and malevolence
It can bring lives to their beginnings
and others to their ends

Time causes immense change
for better or for worse
Sending people into dismay
while filling others with glee

The story of time is difficult
with forks and twists throughout the road
It causes the journeys of many
to end with great abruptness

This is the story of many
who have walked the path of time[/glow]

[Sharon]

Time causes immense change
for better or for worse
Sending people into dismay
while filling others with glee

[glow=purple,2,300]i agree! time can be our best friend and yet it can be our worst enemy. thanks for sharing this with us ;D[/glow]

[Only Me]

"It can bring lives to their beginnings
and others to their ends" the truest lines i have ever read in a poem!

[allmeheart]

more truth in this poem than in most

[Laura]

I really enjoyed this stanza:

"The story of time is difficult
with forks and twists throughout the road
It causes the journeys of many
to end with great abruptness"

--this poem reminds me of how my mind was back when I was young and not angry.