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Post by Absinthe on Aug 4, 2005 8:34:00 GMT -6
*This poem was written for a very good friend of mine who got me through some really tough times.
You are my savior the one who's always there. You kept me from crying and pulling out my hair
You are my savior, the one who wears the crown. You comforted me, when my world came crashing down.
You are my savior though you're no longer near You took away my sadness, laughed away my fear.
You are my savior, the one who I need most. You are the greatest, I do not mean to boast
You are my savior, the sister I never had. You kept me happy, when life made me so sad.
You are my savior, and now that I must go. I will never forget, the love you always show.
*I wrote it for her before I moved away. We've kept in touch since I've gone, but its been a while since I've heard from her and other friends tell me they are worried about her, as am I. Anyway, this poem is for her, the one who kept me alive.
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Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 14:32:56 GMT -6
i can relate to this in many many ways, its nice to see ppl dedicating their work to ppl, it does mean a lot to some
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Post by Only Me on Jun 24, 2006 1:01:14 GMT -6
... Took the words right out of my mouth... I have a friend who later on in our friendship rescued me from a really bad situation. I moved in with her as an orphan ward of the state and began a wonderful new life with my foster family. She became my sister in every way, without her I am not complete, I could not live, I would not be where I am today... "You are my savior, the sister I never had. You kept me happy, when life made me so sad" these lines hit me really hard. I enjoyed the entire poem but these lines seemed to have to most impact on me. Thank you for sharing.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Jun 29, 2006 8:12:05 GMT -6
"You took away my sadness, laughed away my fear."
I thought that was an interesting idea, laughing away fear.
This isn't bad. It's nice of you to write it about your friend.
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Post by BlueMoon on Feb 3, 2007 17:57:42 GMT -6
This is a poem that almost everyone can relate to. I believe that you took the thoughts of people and wrote them done perfectly and realistically. Nice job on this.
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