xxdarkxangelxx
Contently A Distraction
Love me for who I am not who I've become
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dejavu
Aug 2, 2005 12:28:43 GMT -6
Post by xxdarkxangelxx on Aug 2, 2005 12:28:43 GMT -6
Every day is the same thing over and over again.Never changing staying the same.But I think i'll miss it one day. Waking up at 6:00 every Monday.Jusy for today though ,I wish something,anything would change
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dejavu
Aug 3, 2005 20:14:04 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Aug 3, 2005 20:14:04 GMT -6
hmmm....not bad, but I would suggest changing the format and actually putting it in like a stanza format, because this just looks really cluttered.
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dejavu
Aug 20, 2005 14:30:46 GMT -6
Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 14:30:46 GMT -6
please use a format next time, it makes a world of diff. believe me
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dejavu
Jun 24, 2006 0:26:56 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Jun 24, 2006 0:26:56 GMT -6
I think it being cluttered works for the concept. If I were hearing it being read aloud I would probably envision it being cluttered just like this.
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