Breakdown. . . . .(inspired by oneword)

[Absinthe]

This poem was inspired by [www.oneword.com]


Breakdown

Breakdown...
I'm on the edge,
toeing the line.
One step and
I'll fall,
I'll crumble,
I'll shatter.
I'm holding it in,
trying my best
not to explode
with the effort of it all.
I just need a breakdown.
I need to fall,
to crumble,
to shatter.
At least then,
I can pick up the pieces
and craft a whole new me.

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]that's a very interesting concept for a site, i think i'm going to try it some day. so that is what you came up with your word? very cool. nice job [/glow]

[Absinthe]

Yeah, the word for that day was "Breakdown" and thats what I came up with in the 60 second time limit. It's a really cool site....definitely helps get creativity going.

[QueenPaige4]

wow that was pretty good. Nicely done

[allmeheart]

wow, thats really good, esp. when you had a time limit, and the method of insperation reminds me of what i do, i ask a friend for 5 random objects then i relate them in a poem

[Absinthe]

Thank you all for the comments

[Only Me]

that is a cool concept. especially awesome that you came up with it in 60 seconds kudos to you!