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Post by Only Me on Jun 14, 2005 0:17:29 GMT -6
[glow=pink,2,300]Sorry that it has been so long since I have posted. None of my creative people wanted to come out for a while. Here is something I just penned out... hope you like it. [/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]I am the original me The one the only, the original me I am not a copy, not a duplicate, Of some other being. I don’t go with the flow, I don’t run with the crowd, I do my own thing, Of this I am proud. I am not fat nor am I ugly, I am not skinny or pretty Not like you want me to be. I am the original- the original me. I don't try to be you, So please, don't try to be me. I don’t try to fit in, Just be who I am. When I look in the mirror, I see only me. The original me. [/glow]
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Post by allmeheart on Jun 14, 2005 20:23:46 GMT -6
i really like it, it flows and the repetition worked in this poem keep up w/ the good work
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BlueMoon
A Dedicated Distraction
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Post by BlueMoon on Jun 15, 2005 13:45:30 GMT -6
The message is the main thing that struck me. It seems like you wrote about each aspect of being yourself if that makes any sense. If not, ignore me. Anyways, I really like it. Nice job.
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Post by Only Me on Jun 15, 2005 16:04:38 GMT -6
[glow=red,2,300]Bluemoon, that is exactly what it is about... I am so glad that you caught it. I was worried that I would be the only one who understood it.[/glow]
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 2, 2005 7:05:48 GMT -6
Hm...*rereads it and thinks* Yes when I first read the title I thought hm...the original something that can never be changed something that is the one and only. Yep I get the poem. Very good job. I loved it.
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Post by Sharon on Jul 13, 2005 14:32:02 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]have you ever read something that made you say "OH! that was NICE!" well when i read:[/glow]
[glow=purple,2,300]that is exactly what i said. [/glow]
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tommy
Wishes To Be A Distraction
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Post by tommy on Jul 20, 2005 6:51:43 GMT -6
very strong message sent out with this. somthing i think alot of people will connect with. good work
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 20, 2005 9:25:51 GMT -6
I really like this. To me, it's saying that you are trying to protect your individuality, the very essence of your being. I love it.
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Post by haley13xoxo on Jul 25, 2005 17:41:08 GMT -6
"I don't try to be you, So please, don't try to be me." i love this line
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 10, 2005 22:28:41 GMT -6
Always original L. Good poem
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