All I Have Is Me

[Sharon]

You can tell me what to believe-
though I do not have to oblige,
Insist that I have to receive
your bold passes I can deny.

If you must then go on ahead-
highlight my every little fault ,
walking on the line, this thin thread
I will not stop I will not halt.

I may cry or even break down
I may hide in the dark shadows,
I will not smile nor will I frown
I refuse to show my sorrows.

You can tell me what to believe
I will not fuss or even fight,
in the end, all i have is me
in the end, my own heart is right.

[Angelamongsociety]

Good poem! I give it 2 thumbs up!!!!!

[allmeheart]

Thats good, I found it interesting, I say if I was rating it, 9/10, very good, I am thinking of soon posting some of my poems, I have a q and dont know where to put it so Im asking here, how many would you say I should post, I have a lot

[NotSoPerfect]

i would say try not to exceed one each day, that way people get a chance to look at each one carefully and you will not clog up the board.

sharon - certainly not bad. i liked the last stanza the best. a few commas were needed for clarity and and just revise.

[Absinthe]

admin said:

You can tell me what to believe
I will not fuss or even fight,
in the end, all i have is me
in the end, my own heart is right.

That part really stuck out to me. Great job on this, Sharon.

[Only Me]

How is it possible that I missed this poem? It was written well over a year ago and somehow I missed it... hmm. As for the poem
i love it, the concept is amazing. I especially like this line:
"You can tell me what to believe-
though I do not have to oblige,
Insist that I have to receive
your bold passes I can deny" It sets the point of the poem out in the open so that there is no question as to what its about. I love it.~

[thecrazybeautiful]

Not bad Sharon. The rhyming's alright, and I do like the idea. It seems like something I could see your dancing avatar saying... Heh.