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Post by QueenPaige4 on May 15, 2007 15:14:29 GMT -6
((yeah my title is so original )) She looks at her cold hand She's in a trance as she walks to the kitchen She grabs a knife that is on the counter She walks in the bathroom Tears down her face Knife in her hand She screams "All I ever wanted was to be loved." She puts the knife to her wrist Pressing down hard, she slowly slides it across her wrist She screams in pain As she falls to the ground Blood is gushing from her arm She crawls to the phone Grabs it and dials 911 Then she says "I don't want to die." AS she gasps her last breath.
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Post by NotSoPerfect on May 15, 2007 19:35:54 GMT -6
Oh wow... that was pretty dark... but not bad.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on May 17, 2007 18:15:09 GMT -6
Thanks.
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Post by Absinthe on May 24, 2007 22:22:39 GMT -6
This was good. I'm normally not a big fan of the blatant story telling, but in this one you pulled it off. Nice job.
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