Lady Penguin
Wishes To Be A Distraction
I'm a poet and I know it!
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Save Me
Mar 11, 2007 16:08:03 GMT -6
Post by Lady Penguin on Mar 11, 2007 16:08:03 GMT -6
Save Me
I feel like drowning in a sea of my tears, I can barely think straight, blinded by my fears, As if I cant get out, like I'm stuck in the mud, Look down at my clothes, they're all stained with blood,
Save me, my friend, from this wretched insanity, Save me, my dear, from these people's plain vanity, Save me, my sweet, from this pain I feel inside, Save me, my love, from this sorrow I hide,
Theres nothing at all thats clouding my mind, Clouds have gone past lighting has arrived, I'm starting to see things, I'm going crazy, Even my vision is getting a bit hazy,
Save me, my friend, from this awful mess, Save me, my dear, before I get more stressed, Save me, my sweet, you are my selection, Save me, my love, just return my affection,
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Save Me
Mar 17, 2007 13:23:10 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Mar 17, 2007 13:23:10 GMT -6
"Save me, my friend, from this wretched insanity, Save me, my dear, from these people's plain vanity,"
....Okay, I actually liked these two lines. The rhyme is obvious, yes.....but the words are not as predictable as usual with you. I wasn't a fan of the rest of the poem though.
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