lanaia74
Contently A Distraction
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Post by lanaia74 on Dec 5, 2006 4:17:27 GMT -6
Christmas eve when we first met many years ago That was the night I totally changed your life Sharing with you my unholy fate The only good thing in my existense is when you agreed to be my wife.
A thousand years our love we have shared I was selfish to make tou like me All these years together I have loved you and cared But I have a Christmas wish to release you from your hell and set you free.
The ultimate gift to you is for me to set you free But this gift I can't give you because I love you so All the decorations and lights and people seem to be filled with glee People bustling around you can see their faces glow.
Since I love you so I should gladly release you from your hell But see I can't do that Because you are the best thing that happened in this morbid existense like being in jail It kills ne to know you have to creep rhtough the darkness just like a bat.
Of all the Christmas gifts that I could give to you To release you and set you free would be the best of all Biut loving you so this selfishly I could never do Without you my love I would stumble and fall.
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Post by Sharon on Mar 2, 2014 9:58:28 GMT -6
This one definitely has a sad/depressed feel to the poem. I see a few typos there I would recommend you edit though as they are distracting. (not the kind of distraction we want you know what I mean? Thank you for sharing!
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