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Mar 11, 2006 9:51:59 GMT -6
Post by The Sightless Dreamer on Mar 11, 2006 9:51:59 GMT -6
My body is small worn and torn Standing in front of so many Embarrassing and painful This is torture, to begin
He stares at me and his big hands touch my skin I feel nauseated as he continues downward Far Too weak to fight too young to know He forces me down, and takes my faith
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Mar 11, 2006 11:41:55 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Mar 11, 2006 11:41:55 GMT -6
Again, this seems unfinished ... like it needs more to work. The last two lines are the highlight ... not my favourite though.
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