Memories of a Past

[The Sightless Dreamer]

She held her head high that day
She never even shed a tear
She stood tall with the brusies
He arm batterd and scared

Memories from a past long forgotten
Scars never to fade never to heal
Pain in the past that she wouldn't reveal
Her dreams lay broken on the floor

She put up with his shit for far too long
Today she would end it all
She didnt ever shed a tear
Not once did she break down

Never again to accept his pain
Never again to cause him the pain
She felt it happen so long ago
She felt it cause they burried her in the snow

[Laura]

"Never again to accept his pain
Never again to cause him the pain
She felt it happen so long ago
She felt it cause they burried her in the snow "

--the pain repetition doesn't work and the last line is forced rhyme. Let it flow naturally ... don't try to force it to be something it can't be.