Death's Companion

[sweetzrose88]

[shadow=purple,left,300]Death's Companion [/shadow]I never knew life was going to go this way
But then again who expected you
To be the person I never thought you would be

I close my eyes
There you are being romantic toward me
But when I open my eyes
Your just a friend I have in reality
Nothing real about that fantasy

Until I see your blood go splat on the floor
After I cut your throat
From screaming out another person's name

I stare at you and I put my hand over your eyes
To shut them from the shocked reaction you gave me
And I walk away from your corpse
Knowing that your heart never belonged to me
And that you'll be as lonely
As I will for all eternity

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300] That was....um.....slightly disturbing. I kind of liked it. [/glow]

[Laura]

I don't really like the word "splat" here ... it kind of seems ... god I can't think of the word but it doesn't fit well, in my opinion. I like the idea, I think it could have been expanded and more gory though.

[Only Me]

wow... i like it... it gives good imagery... especially the "splat" its realism... its like a fantasy and then SPLAT there we are again back into reality! awesome job... i agree slightly disturbing... but awesome all the same...

[QueenPaige4]

wow....Morbid Yay!! I loved it...very well written