xxdarkxangelxx
Contently A Distraction
Love me for who I am not who I've become
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Post by xxdarkxangelxx on Nov 6, 2005 21:22:05 GMT -6
Whatever happened to the person,
My dark love,
with lies and lost hope,
dead dreams and sadness,
it is a lie,who cares,i'm screwing it up.
Love hurts-sad,lonely,ever changing.
just bleeding the dreams
wishing something anything would change now,
forgive the ones you forsake.
Seeing the face of love,
as I dream of you and my idiotic surroundings.
My sunday love,
ignore what words could never say.
Getting back what was lost,
Kiss me one last time.
Was it the end
who cares,
I screwed it up.
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Post by Laura on Nov 17, 2005 17:24:25 GMT -6
I like the idea of bleeding dreams.
"My sunday love"
--I like this.
"Was it the end
who cares,
I screwed it up"
--this reminds me of me and this guy who I screwed it up with.
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Post by Only Me on Nov 28, 2005 16:06:48 GMT -6
great poem! I like the spacing, sort of giving the reader a moment to let the words sink in...
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Post by Carissa Marie on Jan 17, 2006 22:50:04 GMT -6
I like that.
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