My Bloody Broken Heart

[QueenPaige4]

You left me here waiting with my bloody broken heart
And it's bleeding here like an open wound on the throat
But it's on the table with everything I said
You threw it in my face like all of my mistakes
And I hate you....I hate you!
I really did love you but you left me behind
You tried to control me and I pushed you away
Or so you say "Hey Paige I can't tell if I know that I love you but I think that we should just be friends and I'm leaving you all behind again"
I'm sitting here with you in my head
And it's killing me that you're not dead
You left me here with my bloody broken heart and I'm calling you to come back to me
But you're gone and that's okay
And I'm hoping that you are happy without me
Because I'm fine without you and I'm alive unlike you in my memories
You're fading while I'm falling for someone else
She's calling me awake now and I love her more than I loved you and you said that I'm out of your head and you are dead now In my dreams and memories
To me you are dead and I no longer wish you were here
Now my bloody broken heart stops bleeding
And it's no longer broken because of you
So now I'm waving goodbye to you as you are leaving my heart and mind forever
And I'm glad that this is all over because it's no longer killing me inside.

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]hmm.. is this based on real life or is this hypothetical? either way, well done! the only part i'd suggest you edit is the last line... "no longer" instead of "not longer"[/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

That was a typo. i didn't catch that. thank you sharon. this is actually based on real life. this is my closing poem of the chapter in my life called chris.

[Only Me]

great job! I love it... Would you like me to change your name in the indexes? I think they are all still AddieWright?

[QueenPaige4]

I wouldn't mind that at all if you can then that would be great. thank you so much

[BRÓKÉÑ MÁÑ]

Very descriptive. I did enjoy that one quite a bit. You touch on your feelings, and express them so well. Good job!!

[QueenPaige4]

Thank you very much