elmarie
Contently A Distraction
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Oct 9, 2005 15:22:23 GMT -6
Post by elmarie on Oct 9, 2005 15:22:23 GMT -6
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This was orginally about my mother, but it turned out to be good old Scrooge. Thank you Josh Salt for playing him so well in the school play.
Hate burns though your soul Envy swells up in your breast Inside you’re a crippled wreck Yet you let out no notion, That your life is messed Death reflects on your malicious face Dead is the life you know Life is shattered like a broken vase Emotions sway, to and fro Never will you live A life of peace, of happiness Drenched in your own misery... You cannot bare to wake up Again to your self-imposed isolation
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Oct 9, 2005 15:58:30 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Oct 9, 2005 15:58:30 GMT -6
"You cannot bare to wake up Again to your self-imposed isolation" I love the ending! great job! I can see how its about scrooge, but I know several people it could also be about
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elmarie
Contently A Distraction
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Oct 9, 2005 16:14:27 GMT -6
Post by elmarie on Oct 9, 2005 16:14:27 GMT -6
i was in the play 'a christmas carol' i played belle. but anways, crachit was telling nephew in one of his lines something about self-imposed isolation. most of my best works come from something else. thanks for the comments, el
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Oct 9, 2005 18:22:20 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Oct 9, 2005 18:22:20 GMT -6
awesome... sometimes our best works are from some one else's... sometimes words trigger forgotten or isolated emotions that need to be expressed.... great job...!
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Oct 9, 2005 18:37:15 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Oct 9, 2005 18:37:15 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]agreed, that was greatly written, good job ;D[/glow]
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elmarie
Contently A Distraction
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Oct 9, 2005 20:48:27 GMT -6
Post by elmarie on Oct 9, 2005 20:48:27 GMT -6
thanks all
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