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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 10, 2005 23:22:43 GMT -6
We stopped talking today, The words we say are just too painful. We're killing each other with out raised voices, And hurtful shouts.
We stopped talking last week, The silence between us cuts just as deep. I keep thinking you'll be the first to break, But everyday that passes my hope dims a little more.
We stopped talking last year, I've given up on you. But I'm still alone. My wounds are almost healed.
I saw you the other day, Its been ten years since last we spoke, You've moved on to someone new, And your civil words brought, Back the pain like a knife through the heart.
Its been a century since I saw you on the street, I found someone new to love me more than I loved you, And I can see the pain flash through your eyes, I guess you never truly let me go.
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Post by Only Me on Sept 11, 2005 12:26:29 GMT -6
moving... I really like it... and i have gone through this... right after i was married my ex-fiance came up and told me he loved me and he was sorry... it was a rather pathetic display of remorse..
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 11, 2005 22:50:32 GMT -6
Men can be so stupid sometimes....I honestly dont know where this one came from. I of course have never experienced anything like it but for some reason I tend to write about a lot of things I've never experienced....is it me or is that just a little odd?
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 16, 2005 4:35:37 GMT -6
yeah men are stupid but sometimes you are the one who has to decide if they are even worth the pain. but anyway that poem was great. i loved it.
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Post by Absinthe on Sept 16, 2005 5:40:49 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] This was a good piece. Nice job [/glow]
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 16, 2005 15:44:29 GMT -6
Thank you. I still dont know where that one came from.....I'm thinking Brandon (Risa if you dont get that one, I'm slapping you the next time I see you) Hes an ex....kinda sorta....anyway, I've had it for a while *shrugs and thinks* senior year of high school so about 3 years.
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Post by Only Me on Sept 18, 2005 11:44:30 GMT -6
lol... when did you *meet* brandon? Men are dumb... very dumb... I include my husband in that though I love him dearly... he is dumb when it comes to a lot of things... tee hee ... i got it... you better not slap me...
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Post by Samccaleb on Sept 26, 2005 15:47:01 GMT -6
No slapping I promise.....I like to refer to Brandon and the south end of a north bound mule......yeah thats exactly what he is...anyway.....another subject please because if we stay on the topic of him....im gonna rant and we dont want that...it isnt pretty
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Post by Only Me on Oct 2, 2005 0:19:41 GMT -6
no it aint... so lets get off of that topic... ha ha...
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Post by Samccaleb on Oct 4, 2005 17:48:33 GMT -6
lol goof ball........we could talk about David instead ....just kidding, I promise I wont torment you.
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Post by Only Me on Oct 4, 2005 23:09:32 GMT -6
LOL... at least David is the here and now and not the then and there... he he he
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Post by Samccaleb on Nov 13, 2005 13:11:08 GMT -6
Thats true....if I ever talked to the poor guy. Between the tow of us, we dont have schedules that mesh. Hes working graveyard shifts now, from 11 to 7 or something like that
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Post by Laura on Nov 26, 2005 13:12:56 GMT -6
I liked the ideas in this. It reminds me of someone ...
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