You've Been Inside Her

[Laura]

I am going to start rating my poetry:

Rated R
contains sexual subject matter, coarse language, and violence.

"You've Been Inside Her"

how can her hands fit to yours?
I'm bleeding your blood
- the blood of our unborn child -
when it died, I died
and you smiled
[ somehow ]

yeah f**k you
and how does she taste
. . .
after me?

oh you bloody, bloody battered jerkoff
jacking off to feel the feeling again
I will not cave in to your sorries
spilling from your mouth like lava beans
and your shirt is still dirty with her perfume
tell her [ from me ] she buys it cheap
cheaps for cheap wh**es

and don't tell me I'm angry
[ I f**king know I'm angry ]
I'm only ripping off my clothes
to see if my skin comes with it
and I will walk around bare
to see if my skeleton falls out
and when it does
I hope my ghost finds you

and how does she [ f**king ] taste
after me?
do her lips taste of raspberry
honey
do the insides of her legs make you sweat
like mine do?

don't touch my face to wipe my tears
these tears are not for you
they aren't for me but for our baby
you let her go along with me
and I wasn't strong enough to keep her
when my feet break down
and my body can't hold itself
I will find her too

whether it's inside the floorboards
or creeping the sewer pipes
the blood will leave a scent
and I will follow it until I breathe your bulls**t in
and I will suck it all up
and spit it back at you
hope you drown

and yeah, f**k you
all these beatings I've taken
I've written down
and I will tear each and every page from that journal
and burn them to ashes
when they're all black crystals
these chains will break

how do her hands fit yours?
now I don't care [ anymore ]
when you f**k her and come on home tonight
I won't be there pacing under fluorescent lights
then you can ask yourself

how does she taste
after me?

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300]Wow....just.....wow. That was absolutely charged with emotion and it was...excellent.[/glow]

[Only Me]

<---- speechless... this is definetly one of the more emotional poems on the site. I like how you decided to rate your poetry... kind of gives people a little warning... if your gonna be offended by this then don't read it... thnks again for posting

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]i felt that one, AWESOME job! normally, i look down upon curse words in poetry because people just don't seem to know how to incorporate them properly but you certainly didn't have that problem. great job keep it up ;D[/glow]