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Jul 29, 2005 16:58:37 GMT -6
Post by puchik0 on Jul 29, 2005 16:58:37 GMT -6
ABSENCE
[glow=red,2,300]You werent here once again I know I shouldnt depend on you but Ive grown attached to your presence through thick & thin I was there for you but when it came to my needs you left me out in the dark closed the door & left it shut. I called for you but you wouldnt listen you couldnt hear. I tried to block my feelings but everyday I thought of you and cried in sorrow from your absence in my life.[/glow]
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Jul 29, 2005 20:45:41 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Jul 29, 2005 20:45:41 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]don't ya just hate it when one person in a relationship forgets that a relationship should be a give and take one instead of take take and take? i liked this, good job oh hey Puchiko, i hope the glowy thing is working for you again.[/glow]
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Jul 29, 2005 20:50:00 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on Jul 29, 2005 20:50:00 GMT -6
That wasn't bad.....nice job
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Jul 30, 2005 8:50:16 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 30, 2005 8:50:16 GMT -6
Hm..I don't know what to say. I can relate to it. I'm sure a lot of people can. Well I liked it nice job
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Sept 7, 2005 21:20:31 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Sept 7, 2005 21:20:31 GMT -6
great job... i like how it is broken up... complete thoughts don't complete a line... "through thick & thin I was there for you but when it came to my needs you left me out in the dark closed the door & left it shut." WOW! yup... know that feeling... this is my favorite few lines...
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