Tossed Away

[BlueMoon]

You don't know what it feels like to be tossed away
People acting like that to you every day
You watch everyone else be glad and full of joy
While you just sit there like a broken toy
Why don't they treat me like they know they should?
I've tried...everyone knows that I could
I could make it all the way
But in the end I'm just tossed away



I wrote this poem after I didn't make a part in a musical I hoped for. It was like in October, but I'm wondering what you think of it. Please let me know. Thanks! ;D

[QueenPaige4]

I liked it...I was thinking of a time when everyone tossed me away. It made me think of that time. But overall it was good. Keep up the good work.

[burningsun]

very nice poem. it had a great purpose. keep on writing poems.

[Only Me]

I like it. It really pushes the message out there. Its short and to the point, and it really catches the readers atention because most everyone experiences stuff like this. Though most of us going through it right now don't realize it until later.

[allmeheart]

i really like it, its interesting, story of an outcast is what it seems to be about, maybe im just insane though......

[xxdarkxangelxx]

It seems alittle too short to me . i dont know why, maybe i'm just used to longer poems.