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EARTH
May 13, 2005 22:22:13 GMT -6
Post by puchik0 on May 13, 2005 22:22:13 GMT -6
i give myself a thumbs down cuz it was just random writing put in paper. i did it in class while i was bored. so if sucks just lemme know. i will probably agree with you.
[glow=green,2,300]Earth
Life is but a punishment for the unredeemed soul The dead laugh at us they take part into God’s cruel joke. Life is nothing but lose & gain life is Hell There is no other world, this is it. This is God’s punishment to the souls that had wronged him in past lives, some eons ago.
Life may come and go but the souls will forever remain d**ned in this Hell called Earth.[/glow]
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EARTH
May 14, 2005 8:17:02 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on May 14, 2005 8:17:02 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300] There are people that would disagree with this, particularly those with religious faith. Personally, I believe that life isn't punishment from God, it's God's gift. The only thing that makes it horrible is because of the people who make wrong decisions. Anyway, that's my own opinion, and you're always entitled to your own. I don't see what you don't like about this piece, perhaps the words just came to you and you feel like you didn't put a whole lot of work into it? I don't know. Thank you for sharing though, I'm glad to see you're posting again [/glow]
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suicidetank
Contently A Distraction
very well then
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EARTH
May 16, 2005 18:45:49 GMT -6
Post by suicidetank on May 16, 2005 18:45:49 GMT -6
a mere test i would say who passes and who failes
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EARTH
May 23, 2005 21:34:50 GMT -6
Post by allmeheart on May 23, 2005 21:34:50 GMT -6
i really liked it, read it twice
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EARTH
Sept 7, 2005 21:22:36 GMT -6
Post by Only Me on Sept 7, 2005 21:22:36 GMT -6
I completely agree with this poem! thanks for putting it into writing
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