Stepford Teen

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300]*A little warning for this one: There's is a bit of swearing in this. Now, I dont usually swear....it's just not my thing.....but when I wrote this I was really upset and didn't really care about propriety.*







You act like you're the good guy,
but you're not.
You are such a f*cking hypocrite.
You scream and yell at those
who do nothing but show you respect,

But hold irrelevant conversations with those who walk all over you.
You are a pr*ck, and a$$-hole, and so many other derogatory things.
You piss me off and act like you know everything.

Then you go so far as to include my parents.
You say they're the way they are
because of me.
You don't know sh*t!
Don't you EVER act like you know anything about my "home life",
because you don't have a clue.
I give all of myself in everything I do and you and my parents act like its nothing.
You criticize, you yell,
you inflict punishment when I've done nothing wrong.
You act without all of the facts and then you won't let me explain.

I'm sick and tired of living for you,
of doing everything I'm told.

I just want to be me.
I don't care if its who you want me to be.

Maybe I'll just give up, give in, let you take me over – Let my entire meaningless existence
slip away to leave only a hollow shell.
A stepford daughter, a stepford student.
Press a button and I'll do exactly as you please.
No opinions, no free will,
nothing but obedience.

Go ahead;
Make me your godd*mn Stepford Teen.
I don't f*cking care anymore.[/glow]

[Xanthic Flower]

[glow=red,2,300]I love the ending:

Go ahead;
Make me your godd*mn Stepford Teen.
I don't f*cking care anymore.[/glow]

[Laura]

"Don't you EVER act like you know anything about my "home life",
because you don't have a clue.
I give all of myself in everything I do"

--hit close to home for me. It's like a rant poem but hey, everyone seems to feel this way at some point in their life. I like my readings angry so this is good.

[QueenPaige4]

Very good. I liked it. It reminded me of the movie Stepford Wives but thats only because you used the word Stepford. but anyway it was really good, keep on writing you have a real talent

[Only Me]

I can see where you are coming from. Its just so hard to be what everyone wants you to be when you only want to be yourself...

[Absinthe]

[glow=black,2,300]Thank you all for the comments.

Forgotten: "It reminded me of the movie Stepford Wives but thats only because you used the word Stepford." I'm glad you picked up on my reference. The use of "Stepford" was actually in reference to that movie, or at least the concept of it. After all, the Stepford Wives were "perfect" and to make them do as the husbands pleased, they only had to press a button. Vile, if you ask me.....


Anyway, thank you all for the comments.[/glow]