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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 12, 2005 18:23:17 GMT -6
The moments with you were like seconds in a minute The time went by so fast and now my wounds are opening again It feels like salt is being poured onto them But you don't care that I'm standing here being crazy while slitting every part of my body And screaming that this is for all the pain you made me feel This is for you, Chris You're telling me to stop but the knife is at my throat You try to grab it but you see all my blood on the floor You see what you've done to me You are still telling me to stop but I'm not stopping And the blood is flowing down my body like a waterfall As I collapse now dead Because of you.
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Post by Absinthe on Aug 12, 2005 20:12:44 GMT -6
That was intense....full of emotion. It helps to write it out, doesn't it? At least, I think it does. Great job and thanks for sharing this.
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Aug 13, 2005 11:02:07 GMT -6
thank you for the feed back.
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Post by allmeheart on Aug 20, 2005 14:07:30 GMT -6
nice details. good job
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Post by Only Me on Sept 7, 2005 22:04:53 GMT -6
i can actually see the action unfolding... i like it...
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Sept 8, 2005 16:01:29 GMT -6
Thank you all for everything
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