Please Don't. . . .

[Absinthe]

*Another one from a rather dark period of my life.*


Please Don't....

Please don't make me do this
I don't want to do this
You've taken control
And I would give anything
to have it back

Please don't make me do this
I don't want to do this
You've taken hold
And I would give anything
to break free

Please Don't make me do this
I don't want to do this
You've broken me
And I would give anything
to be fixed

How could you do this?
I didn't want to do this
You tore me down
And I'm doing everything
to rise again

I can't believe you did this
I didn't want to do this
You've hurt me
And I would give anything
to be okay.

[QueenPaige4]

wow. I love that poem. its beautiful.

[Absinthe]

Thank you

[allmeheart]

i loved it, great poem

[Only Me]

"You've broken me
And I would give anything
to be fixed" touched my heart... i felt that way for a long long time in my life... great emotion...

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]i sometimes find myself cringing when i come across poetry with over-repetition but this is definitely not the case for this particular piece. great job on this.[/glow]

[Laura]

I'm unsure of the message behind it. It could be taken many ways but, of course, my mind likes to think of descriptions like this to have sexual background. The idea of not wanting and the ideas of wanting to be fixed afterwards ...

There, I've drawn my own conclusion. I can kind of relate to the general message of not wanting ... but since I have no idea what this is truly about, I can't say I relate. Good job.