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Post by Absinthe on Jul 28, 2005 16:22:15 GMT -6
Another one inspired by oneword.com the word was 'wrench'
Wrench my heart from my chest.
Hold it bloody and dripping
in your hand.
Feel it pumping
with the remnants of my
long forgotten past.
The love I had for you,
the love you had for me
now rests in your hands
in that bleeding heart
which you pulled free
from my bosom.
Don't let it dry up....
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Post by allmeheart on Jul 28, 2005 19:37:36 GMT -6
I haven't seen a one verse poem that had such good imagery
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 29, 2005 16:51:32 GMT -6
thanks  |
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Post by Sharon on Jul 29, 2005 21:00:56 GMT -6
[glow=purple,2,300]wow, if i were to work with that word, i'd probably start talking about tools in a tool box lol
The wrench was next to the hammer
above the nails and the screws
next to it was a phillips head
wondering which one of them will be used
haha! anyways... i like what you came up with MUCH better, good job ;D[/glow]
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 29, 2005 21:02:40 GMT -6
Aww...thanks, Sharon. "The wrench was next to the hammer above the nails and the screws next to it was a phillips head wondering which one of them will be used"  , I love it! |
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Post by QueenPaige4 on Jul 30, 2005 12:41:32 GMT -6
That was a very good poem.
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Post by Absinthe on Jul 30, 2005 19:44:00 GMT -6
Thank you for the feedback.
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Post by Only Me on Sept 7, 2005 22:25:37 GMT -6
great job for a 60 second poem once again... yea I probably would ahve taken the "tool" route as well... great job  |
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Post by Absinthe on Oct 25, 2005 17:43:51 GMT -6
[glow=black,2,300] Thanks [/glow] |
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, I love it!
