razor cuts

[haley13xoxo]

razor cuts
by haley

the razor cuts on my arms
are only one part of my story
the scars ur eyes quickly find
are only a chapter in my book

so dont judge me by my scars
dont judge me by my mistakes

you quickly assume you know my type
but you dont know me
you only know a chapter in my story

[Absinthe]

It was good, though I would suggest not using slang such as "ur" in formal poetry such as this. To me, it didn't really fit with the style.

It sounds to me like you've got a past and its great you can write about it. Keep it up

[Sharon]

[glow=purple,2,300]i love the message you have here. i really do. good job[/glow]

[QueenPaige4]

i liked the message too. very good

[allmeheart]

good job, sounds like an arguement i had w/ a friend in a way, i can relate to this, i say, scars are of the past, don't dwell

[Only Me]

amen to that! You only know a chapter... I love that... it is SO true..