Vampire's Vanity

[QueenPaige4]

((Enjoy the lastest creation from me.))


I see the image of you walking away from me
You go up to her and embrace
As I watch you leave hand in hand with that girl
I wonder, is there anyone for me?
I know there is and he could be right in front of me
But I'm too blind to see
The smoke came too thickly
And the bombs are falling down like rain
I do love you
I will always love you
but you aren't the one for me
If only you could see that I never meant to hurt you
It wasn't my intention
I didn't know what my intention was
I didn't really have one
I never expected this to go so far
but it did and now I'm dying slowly on the inside
While the vampire in the mirror is telling me he loves me
and mysteriously he turns into a werewolf
A stupendous strong werewolf who will save me from the storm
The bombs keep falling as I lay there crying
about the way things use to be with you
Then the wolf comes up to me and lays down next to me
He makes me realize how much he means to me
So I thank you for the memories, they were all good
And I bid you farewell, have a good life.


((Note: I didn't know where else to put this.))

[The Brutal Immortal]

this is good, i liek it, a couple lines throw off the flow for a second, but it catches back on pretty quick, i liek the subject and overall poem, the kind of thing i liek to write, this type of poem inspires me. keep writing 5/5

[QueenPaige4]

Thank you for the feed back.