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May 21, 2007 22:07:57 GMT -6
Post by Cullen on May 21, 2007 22:07:57 GMT -6
I did that oneword.com thingy or whatever the word was "venus"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Venus, societies perfection a love without direction not love but lust for beauty undying is tragedy its meant to be that you and i will lie amongst the stars be my Juliet for i your romeo will mourn thy death for not but an hour for girl crazy i will find another
Pandora, new horizons Thus now found taboo...
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May 22, 2007 15:00:03 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on May 22, 2007 15:00:03 GMT -6
These lines;
"not love but lust for beauty undying is tragedy"
....I loved. I also liked;
"I will find another Pandora"
- that was interesting, I thought. Overall, I don't love it, nor do I hate it. I'm somewhere in the middle, I suppose. It's good but, not great.
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May 22, 2007 15:01:15 GMT -6
Post by Cullen on May 22, 2007 15:01:15 GMT -6
hey that's all i can promise in 30 seconds
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May 22, 2007 15:41:26 GMT -6
Post by Absinthe on May 22, 2007 15:41:26 GMT -6
Ah, I didn't even read that part - and it's actually 60 seconds - it's good for a 60 second piece then
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