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Post by Absinthe on May 20, 2007 22:59:54 GMT -6
Just penned this one at www.oneword.com . The word was "Generate" This is the 60 second rant/poem that came out of it. Suggestions/Opinions? I haven't written in a while. She generates hope and hipocracy in a world full of sugar coated lies. Her dream big, f**k the establishment attitude sparkles in ways easily recognized by a world of disassembled youths flocking to the downtrodden beats of hippie gone eurotrash. They're all a mis-match of abercrombie, hot topic wannabes, not sure which side is more apt to allow a complete disintegration of integrity coupled with peace, save the f**k**g trees, or whales, or whichever trend is fashionable in the here and now. Nobody cares about the why or the how, they just listen to the thrashing pseudo chords and flashy melodies that make no sense at all. But they find meaning in nonsensical solutions to the worlds disasters and downfalls. She generates hope and hipocracy in a world full of sheep. . .
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Post by NotSoPerfect on May 21, 2007 10:08:38 GMT -6
I liked it.
Usually I wouldn't, just because I'm sick of the old 'I'm a non-conformist and I hate conformity' stuff, but yours was much more detailed and observant than that. I think you have a knack for describing detail in a way that you can maintain your tone.
The theme wasn't my favorite, but I love what you did with it. Nice job, dude.
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Post by Absinthe on Oct 13, 2007 19:29:39 GMT -6
Thanks!
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Post by The Brutal Immortal on Oct 14, 2007 9:30:41 GMT -6
i agree with NotSoPerfect, im kinda sick of this theme, its every wheres now, but this gives it a new meaning, normally i just wouldnt read this type of poem, just because of wat its about, but this one actually kept my attention, good job!
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Post by Absinthe on Feb 7, 2008 9:40:35 GMT -6
Haha - the funny part about this poem is that I'm not one of those "non-conformist" types, honestly.
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