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Post by Absinthe on Feb 24, 2007 23:59:26 GMT -6
Okay, so I went to my uni's theater production of "The Festival of Ten"...which is basically a night of theater composed of ten 10 minute plays by different authors. One of the plays was called "Intensity" about a college athelete who was injured and at risk of losing his scholarship. I wrote this poem in the minute or so during set change for the next play.
Intensity. . . hardcore, raw, adrenaline pumping, intensity. Seeing red in all directions, green flashes toward risky opponents. Intensity. . . flesh eating, burning, passionate, unforgiving. . . Intensity.
I cant seem to write anything lately, but anyway...yeah. What do you think?
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Post by Sharon on Mar 10, 2007 21:11:38 GMT -6
What I saw when I read this... red (lazer-like) green flashes - people (crowd), sharp teeth, fire, smoke.
Short - but still evokes images from the mind of the reader - very cool.
Honestly, I haven't written much lately and I've been putting off writing simply because I'm afraid I won't come up with anything good. I suppose, whatever I write next won't be great but the writing I do afterward would be better. It's hard to find the motivation though.
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