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Nov 30, 2006 16:54:16 GMT -6
Post by Laura on Nov 30, 2006 16:54:16 GMT -6
I'm suppose to be fragile as breakable as they come see my arms they're glass oh crash. crash into them.
my lips are turning blue teeth chattering fingers loosening unfasten this seatbelt slide out to the backseat the floor is greasy the paint is chipping the roof is leaking I am spilling all my guts like money
this is how a boy like you and a girl like me make babies uncensored fucking windows fogging police knocking the door is locked you don't see me jumping at the look on his face you don't see me scribbling I'm sorry all over the place
and my legs are still spread even when the words "just a warning" flood out of his horny mouth whatever gets you off, I should have said then smiled then whipped my hair around unzipped your crooked zipper and screamed STEP ON IT.
it's now so warm in here the battery is low my rings slipping off from the heat your eyes sweating safer in the front seat it's where the protection was kept glove compartment my maze is much more intense when it's clear of everything
there I was pinching your skin biting your lip curving my shape into yours
there I was spitting out love or bits of what could be if sex was enough
but.
BUT.
I'm suppose to be fragile as breakable as they come my arms as thin as glass oh CRASH.
crash into them.
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Dec 7, 2006 14:27:14 GMT -6
Post by QueenPaige4 on Dec 7, 2006 14:27:14 GMT -6
I seriously don't know what to say about this one.
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Jan 14, 2007 10:21:53 GMT -6
Post by Sharon on Jan 14, 2007 10:21:53 GMT -6
wow... that is one intense piece, sorry I hadn't replied to it sooner. What I like about your writing is once one starts reading your piece you hold their attention throughout the whole piece and before they know it they're reading the last line. great stuff
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