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Post by Laura on Oct 10, 2006 20:00:51 GMT -6
I'm under a folding chair, hiding afraid the light will catch me at a bad angle and today that is every angle
I'm flagging everything a warning not to come closer and if the white flags turn to pink and the pink flags turn to red - you have gone too far
be aware of my fragile unstable state I couldn't pounce with missing energy but I can scream, make you cry, rip your heart out
I'm under a bridge like structure in the middle of my home it's as cool as pavement in December
pretend for a second you understand comprehend where I'm coming from it's only a little negative and lots of bluffing it will make you stronger to it in the end
WEDNESDAY is an ugly day made from sparks chipped off the sun born after Tuesday - it bleeds insignificance
so take a Wednesday to recognize how I feel hiding in a stranger's back pocket afraid of the light and how it always catches me
. . . at bad angles.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Oct 11, 2006 13:33:35 GMT -6
"WEDNESDAY is an ugly day made from sparks chipped off the sun"
I read this in class this morning with a friend of mine, and at that part we both agreed that it's true. Wednesday really is an ugly day. It used to be my favorite, but things change I guess. And today did pretty much suck.
Wednesday is a let-down.
The ending's really good in this. I dunno, I like this, all of it.
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Post by Laura on Oct 11, 2006 15:25:53 GMT -6
yes, today was nasty. It rained all day. I'm kind of in a rut right now so it's good to get something out that someone likes
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Post by Only Me on Oct 24, 2006 12:06:19 GMT -6
its good. I liked this line "pretend for a second you understand" Wednesday are blah for me as well... It does seem to jump around... like you think you get the meaning and then you mention something else and you realize you were wrong... does that make sense? I enjoyed it
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