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Post by Only Me on Sept 4, 2006 18:49:54 GMT -6
I was going to wait until I had time to post on some other poetry first... but I'm not going to be on for awhile so before I forgot, I thought I would post this just to let you all read it... ;-) [color= These games we play,
This merry-go-round we ride on,
He said, she said, we said, they said...
but who really said that she said that?
This playground of lies,
A web we weave,
Cliques and cliches,
Are what we perceive.
Who did this when she did that,
Oh he's doing that and we may do this...
They did what, while it did... why?
So the question is who, the answer is you.
Pushing, shoving,
Solve their crisis,
Cause our problem.
Where did this start,
Why won't it end?
When did we meet?
Who did we see?
What is my point?
Exactly.
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on Sept 5, 2006 15:38:25 GMT -6
Ha, I loved that ending!
"He said, she said, we said, they said...
but who really said that she said that?"
And I liked that part... It reminds me of a song I really like.
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Post by Sharon on Sept 7, 2006 19:49:17 GMT -6
the text is tad bit hard to read on this computer but after deciphering what the text said - I think this was a good piece. I'm gonna start trying to leave feedbacks to random pieces. It's great to see your writing again.
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