Midnight Sun in AP-REE-COT

[Laura]

A/N: what do you think of this weird spontaneous ramble jam? It's messed.

Midnight Sun in AP-REE-COT

ghostly white
shining bright
in the decay
of the moonlight
i see a smile
somewhere far
it's nature now
begging for fall



trapping jesus-
susan
on the backside
backstreet
give her hands
an old brown penny
'cause she'll do any-
thing for money


sky is changing
resemblance fading
into a vortex
of a mind that's blanking
out there
a woman calls
shelter no longer
lives in here

we please
pipers stuck in chimneys
ask you please
you dance in the nude
still no shoes


broken chandelier
ten times the fear
gaining speed
on my elephant's tear
somewhere far
a baby's shot
the blood is death
rolling to rot



trapping jesus
susan
find her on the backside
backstreet
give her smiles
give her a penny
no movement left
in her girly presence


trap
trap
trapping....................................................
......................................JESUS.

[thecrazybeautiful]

I read this the other day, by my head wasn't on straight, and I wasn't up to thinking. I actually felt that I could make sense of the weirdness of it, now I've just settled on liking the weirdness

It's like random rhyme, random images, and yet it still seems to make me happy while reading it.

"give her smiles
give her a penny
no movement left
in her girly presence"

I like that.

[Only Me]

I love how each line is a new sentence, a new thought, but they are also the same thoughts as the previous line... like you are using a word twice without using it twice... ok. that makes sense to me but my head hasn't been on straight for a long time...
heres an example of what I mean...

"we please
pipers stuck in chimneys"

Its two separate lines/ thoughts... "We please" and "Pipers stuck in chimneys" but it is also one complete thought... "We please pipers stuck in chimneys" I love it when poetry does that.