grifter
A Devoted Distraction
Posts: 135
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Post by grifter on May 5, 2006 21:30:03 GMT -6
there's little
difference
betwixt
depression
and
aggression
merely the
direction
of
expression
outward
or
inward
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Post by Laura on May 6, 2006 8:02:24 GMT -6
Hmm...quite interesting concept here. I like how you included many "sions" in there to make it flow. I also think your line breaks are effective. Good job  |
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 7, 2006 12:54:31 GMT -6
"merely the
direction
of
expression"
I like the choice of words.
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Post by Sharon on May 13, 2006 22:32:48 GMT -6
the word "betwixt" kind of threw me off (for those that are wondering yes, there is such a word!  ) i liked that, short and true. |
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Post by Absinthe on May 21, 2006 20:20:22 GMT -6
I like that |
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Post by Only Me on Jul 4, 2006 23:38:17 GMT -6
i think i live the format best, it seems to break it in the perfect places.
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) i liked that, short and true.
