a flower grew in my mind perchance

[grifter]

a flower grew
in my mind perchance
and there lay a ladybug
nestled in the petals
hidden from a humble
bumblebee’s perspective
and spider webs
of sticky thread
were spun
inside my head
an arachnid’s
deadly arrangement
for any aphids
then dawn yawned
daylight’s song upon
the blessed blossom
bloomed and
blown by
the wind’s imagination
as noon loomed
rain ran down
from the sky
to the ground
and the sound
like a crowd
from the clouds
drowned out
all thought
but as the sun
sank the stars
stirred and
the flower
opened
in reverse

[Laura]

Where are the responses?

"and there lay a ladybug
nestled in the petals
hidden from a humble
bumblebee’s perspective
and spider webs
of sticky thread"

--absolutely lovely. The description is breath taking and the idea of the hidden lady bug just blew me away

"as noon loomed
rain ran down
from the sky
to the ground
and the sound
like a crowd
from the clouds
drowned out "

--I wish I could write like you.

[grifter]

awww, thank you darlin, you're a peach, it's just another random rambling rhyme, from a picture in my mind, glad you enjoyed it

[stupidxgirl]

This is amazing doll <3 I love how you write, absolutely breath taking!

[thecrazybeautiful]

I like the descriptions of the bugs at the beginning. I used to absolutely love bugs.

"but as the sun
sank the stars"

That is great. Honestly.