xsavemex
Wishes To Be A Distraction
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Post by xsavemex on Apr 29, 2006 17:35:36 GMT -6
No one knows who we really are inside. Sometimes we want to run and hide. But if we want change, we need to re-arrange, so to be on the road to Acception and begin to fix their Perception.
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Post by Laura on Apr 30, 2006 18:06:40 GMT -6
I don't know about the breaks ... such as between "are" and "inside" on lines 1-2 and the same goes for lines 3-4 ... I think they could be on the same line. This has potential. Welcome to the boards
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Post by thecrazybeautiful on May 1, 2006 16:32:08 GMT -6
It's a pretty common idea... I don't really know what to say.
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